The Fine Line

I spent a lot of time working on my best selling high fantasy novel.  A year or so ago I thought I was ready to publish.  I went looking for an agent.  Well, at least I thought it would be a best selling high fantasy novel.  I have learned I still have a lot to learn and a lot of work to do on my manuscript before it is ready to be my debut novel, and hopefully a best seller.

I made several mistakes, I wrote alone.  I had close family and friends read my work and tell me how great my writing was.  So I was surprised at all the rejection letters I received.  However, I was (and am) very determined to publish my book.

I ran across a wonderful website Agent Query Connect.  This is a fantastic forum full of knowledgeable writers and other writing industry insiders. Here I learned my mistakes.

180,000 word book is way too long especially for a debut novel.  Next my book was not a stand alone story, I had written over 400,000 words in three books!  No one is going to touch that!

I got educated on this web site.  I’ve learned you need critique partners.  People who are honest about your work, unlike family who think you are the next best seller.  You also need some good beta readers who can pick out plot holes, or grammar errors.

I say that because I want to relate an experience I just had and give a word of caution to the aspiring writers reading this.

Finding an agent/publisher/editor to publish your work is a very tough job.  Once someone agrees to publish your work, there is more effort to go through and several years before you hold your book in your hands.

Another route is self publishing.  It has a lot of advantages, but there are some hidden dangers there.

So a few months ago I saw an online ad about formatting for an e-reader.  I thought that would be great so I clicked on the ad, thinking I was going to get a program that would format my ms into something I could put onto my nook.

I have printed my entire ms and bound them to look just a published book, page numbers, chapters, front and back, etc.  I love seeing what the book would look like.   So I was excited about taking it to the e-book.

However, the ad was for a publishing outfit.  They called and wanted to sign me up to publish my work.  They were persistent and persuasive.  I know my writing isn’t ready for publication.  I am in the process of rewriting my first book to make it a stand alone book.  I am not sure how well that project is going, my critique partners have given me a lot to digest on my first two chapters, and I am writing a new chapter to send to them.  It is slow going.  The publishing company called again wanting me to sign up.  The Representative was so busy selling me my dream about seeing my work in print they were not listening to me explain the technical issues and writing problems my book(s) have.  They just heard trilogy and three books, with another one written!  Lets get it signed up now!

I almost had to get rude on the phone when I said, “My manuscript is not ready for publication.”

Sure, I could send it out.  It will bomb the way it stands now.  I know that, but only because I’ve been working with some very talented people at AQC.  If I had clicked on that link a few years ago I would be a published author, but I would have ruined my reputation before I had a chance to make a positive impact.

So yes, lets get published!  Make sure you are ready to publish before you submit to agents, or go the self publishing route.  Be true to your craft.  Be true to yourself.  There is a fine line between being ready and waiting because of doubts, and publishing before being ready.  Know which side of the line you are on and make the needed adjustments.  If you are ready and keep tinkering with the synopsis and query letter, there is a time to just jump in and make it happen.

If your beta readers and crit partners are giving you more advice on what is needed, listen to them and keep working.  You are not ready to publish.

It is a journey, but remember, this is an industry and a business.  Learn your craft, and know when to put up the artistic side and put on your business hat.  Good luck.



About Dean C, Rich

I write fantasy. I've four completed manuscripts, but I've learned I've approached this the wrong way. I'm sharing what I've learned so I can help others avoid the mistakes I've made.

3 thoughts on “The Fine Line

  1. Peter Burton says:

    A very thoughtful post, Dean, and quite true.

    It sounds to me like you ran into the literary equivalent of a used car salesman. And that should throw up enough red flags to stampede a herd of Texas Longhorns.

    I would only add this: If any aspiring writer out there happen to encounter folks like Dean just described… Run… Leave a trail of fire behind you that makes The Roadrunner cry with jealousy. These kind of people are not interested in helping you get published, only getting what they can for themselves.

    I, personally, call them parasites. Treat them as such.

  2. tjloveless3 says:

    Hit the nail on the head, Dean.

  3. Very wise advice, Dean. I think AQC has taught a lot of people what they needed to know. It has done wonders for me.

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